It adds nothing to the yokai lore
Track list:
Read or Die the TV Opening
"Opaque" Co-Composed by me and DeediStar1 on Twitter:
https://mobile.twitter.com/DeediStar1
Story by Mog
Listen to OST here
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/810073?updated=1528680745
Alright! First time I've ever done a collab project! Tell me what you guys think! Please report any bugs.
Lucario Dating Sim 3 Episode 2 coming soon!
It adds nothing to the yokai lore
Hiya! It's me again~
This turned out quite nice~ the story is neat, and the drawings are pretty cute ^-^
So! Things to think about for the next game! :D
* I'd be careful with the controls.
While they are easy to get used to on a second playthrough, they are still very slippery. Two things you could do would be to use your Lucario Dating Sim 3 as reference (the controls on that one were really good!) or maybe turn the thing on it's head and "change the weather" in the story to a snowy storm (which would neatly justify why the controls are slippery, without having to address it directly. Is kinda lazy, but works as well ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ )
* You found a way to deal with those nasty hitboxes!! :D
Making the animations (specially jumping) not much wider than the standing/walking ones pretty much solved that issue with hitboxes I mentioned previously ^-^ good job~
* Try to reduce "chance" and reward "skill"
The minigame in which you have to dodge vehicles starts well, though it randomly starts to spawn vehicles in the middle of the screen. That gives the player no reaction time to avoid them. ;3 that's kinda evil. heheh =)
* More art!
It's pretty ^-^ either you are improving, or you're showing us more of your awesome ;3 keep it up
I'm no expert in art, but maybe you could try coloring the lines as well? :3
looks fine to me the way it is, but I just thought black kinda divides things. Tried coloring the lines and it makes everything blend together https://i.imgur.com/Bam5d1x.png maybe you could try it out and upload the results for us to see ^-^
( also, sorry for butchering your art ;-; i just wanted to try coloring the lines and see if it made any difference XD maybe it doesn't and it's just my personal preference ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ )
Keep improving ^-^ ❤
Thanks so much! I appreciate the feedback
I made a new game finaly you might like it! https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/715931?updated=1534906013
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Thanks for the five stars! :D