Can this even be considered an animation? Seriously... there is no depth to it other than what you say in the description. At least it is smooth, I''ll give you that.
Bad Dream Jam
This is my entry for the bad dream challenge.
https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1432649
This is a short animation in attempts to show the fear that you receive from having a bad dream... Your mind will play tricks on you at night time when you're all alone in the dark, or are you all alone?
As always criticism helps a lot so go all out :)
Thanks for watching dudes! <3
Phesired responds:
Mean
So he was dreaming of being at his own funeral.. Then he was there?
Okay..
the animation is OK and i really don't get it if there even is something to get about this but it's kinda interesting and i really like the outro music so good job
Phesired responds:
Ah read the description my friend, all will become clear. However I do agree, you shouldn't have to read the description to understand the movie, perhaps something I need to work on next time, I just wanted some mystery.
Thanks for the feedback good sir!
Not much animation, but the art is okay. I was a little confused at first but after rewatching and reading your description it makes sense. I quite like the concept of waking up and then the bad dream being real, or at least you thinking it's real. I know that feeling well. Maybe you could have shown some sort of outline in the dark, since in this situation, we tend to mistake everyday objects in the dark for monsters. Keep at it, man! You have some cool ideas.
Phesired responds:
Thanks for the good advice.
I am going to be honest, I wanted to draw some sort of silhouette in the dark in a POV scene but I was worried I would make my animation look tacky and spoil it with one bad looking scene, after seeing you say it too I now know it's definitely something I should of explored.
I am glad I got to take part in this project, I think with being new I am always learning, and feedback like this is always helpful.
You gave me quite a scare with suspense
Phesired responds:
Thank you good sir :)
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Daily 4th Place June 11, 2018
