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Treasure the Mermaid

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An adventure-seeking mermaid named Treasure, goes exploring a sunken ship to find a rare chest of gold. Little does she know, danger lurks beneath...

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Love the visuals

Wow I have to say that the visuals and animation in this film are really outstanding and you have some nice "CHARACTERS" along with some nice ideas here I really like how theres a story here would love to see you expand on this a bit more, seems to loop too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
fix the loop unless thats the idea, and more depth into the story here.

~X~

It loops... by intention? Really smooth animation, and with a movie-quality soundtrack too, though doesn't seem like it really leads anywhere. There's the crisis with the monster, the resolution, the treasure, the monster again... where does it go? How does it end? Does this imply that: in our search for greater riches we will never truly be content? There will always be someone (or thing) wanting to steal those treasures from us? That life goes on? Well, underthinking things: awesome animation. :) Enjoyed, though it does make me ponder...

-cd-

The animation is pretty fluid. the only flaw is the music jumps from subtle to dramatic very quickly leaving little time to transition can be annoying to listen to, especially when watching on repeat a couple of times. maybe if you fade out the end of each audio clip it would sound less abrupt. the video itself is good, and the music you chosen definitely fit the scene but the way the were applied could use some reworking.

Nice staging! How'd the tentacle get cut? The music changes are too abrupt.

Cute animation and good choice of music. However I feel that the transitions between your different background music is too sudden and a bit jarring even if the sounds used are appropriate.

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Score
3.73 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 2, 2018
1:36 AM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place June 3, 2018