Dungeon Misadventures Episode 2: The Roots of Loitering

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Dungeon Misadventures Episode 2: The Roots of Loitering

Talia, Saturn, and Green are commissioned to remove some trees from a strange woman who lives on the plains.

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"The finest BAK" gets me every single time.

There is clearly a lot of work put into this but I feel like most of the humour was rehashed from other animations or over used through out the video.

Animation wise; anything moving about was normally very good but the lip syncing was quite bad for most of it and somewhat distracting at times.

Personally I think it would of been more funny to have the tree at the end to be chopped down by the gun instead of just set on fire as it seems somewhat obvious to use a gun to set something on fire; but that's just me being picky.

Overall Good job on the animation and hopeful you make more in the future.

thebreadandbutter responds:

Thank you very much for your critiques
I will take them to heart and continue my never ending quest to become an okay animator!
*flies off into the night*

nice :)

thebreadandbutter responds:

Thank you PatrickDomingo, glad you liked it!

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3.65 / 5.00

May 21, 2018
1:22 AM EDT
Comedy - Original
  • Daily 3rd Place May 22, 2018