RESET - LOVEtale #3

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Despite school keeping me busy for about a month now...I still managed to get this done! I'm really proud of it and have already thought of improvements for the next episode! I hope you enjoy it! Be sure to share if you like it :-P Thanks so much for all you guys' support towards this!!!

Time taken: 3 months

Software used: Mecromedia Flash Professional 8

Songs used:

that one wind sound from undertale (tm)- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QB0ds...

Undertale OST 005- Ruins- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QyPR7...

Undertale OST 017- Snowy- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8BIeG...

Whoopie-Doo! Undertale Sound Effect- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qgGtR...

Undertale OST 020 - Mysterious Place- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gC11H...

Undertale - Snowy (Genocide)- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qF58N...

Undertale flower laugh- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iOsZK...

Undertale OST 032 - Run!- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PPapt...

Undertale Sound Effect - Bathroom Door- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Ol0f...

Undertale OST 048 - Alphys- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xG2At...

Megalo Strike Back (Chara fight theme)- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6erG...

Undertale OST 015 - sans.- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zzo6L...

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The art is pretty OK. Some of the fight animation is pretty good, but I don't understand why you would turn all the monsters into similar looking human children. One big problem with this is the editing. It's all over the place. Literally. You show a couple seconds at one place, then cut to another one and we have no idea where we even are. You skip a bunch of stuff like it's not important when we're expecting you to show us more of them, and that can be disorienting. You cut off things that are supposed to happen. You don't show Frisk walking through Papyrus' puzzle and when Frisk gets captured by Undine we're...in Alphys' lab(?). Also, during the Chara fight you break the action axis multiple times. First Chara is on the right, then on the left. Then Chara rushes to the right, only to emerge on that very side. Be more aware of your setting. Also, Chara has no logical reason to attack Frisk, as they are vital to Chara's plan.

EFabn86YT responds:

thank u 4 ur feedback. i understand what ur saying but plse b aware that this is my story and u dont know the entirety of it. im gonna b taking more time 2 do my animations so that its the best it can b! i will try 2 make sure i dont put irellevant things in my animations. ;-)

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2.78 / 5.00

May 19, 2018
11:27 PM EDT