Umm.
Work on the 2nd one a little, this seems really cool but it needs more time spent into it, and don't make it last so long on the text, reading=boring=bad rating, thats a real equation, designed by me, on this very second.
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Orayu X Episode 1 - The Beginning
The first episode of Orayu X has been released... This flash video took me a week to finish and i put alot of effort into this video even tho alot of it is text! I had to come up with the whole story and plot behind it... This Episode is mainly text but it still has some cool stuff to it! The reason for the text was because i had to tell the story. This will be the last episode with so much text in it...
The second episode of Orayu X should be out in a week or two.
Orayu X Episode 2 - The Orayu Sword
This episode will follow X on his journey to find the legendary Orayu sword. Which is the only thing that can permanently defeat the demon that is known as Devin in the story. You can kill him other ways but he will come back. X finds this out the hard way....So stay caught up in this series i promise it will be a kick ass series
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Dude...what the hell is going on
All I can say is that your animation skills are at a better than average level, but man the story is so weak. There's not really much development going on and I can see you're trying to word things to make it more appealing. I think for a better plot, you should slow things down and construct who your characters are. Don't use sentences that can be seen in movie previews. That would help make your movie much more enjoyable.
but overall it was good
this is a bog file cos i got a modem but it was worth it
Hey that was cool
Great story, but it would have been better if he had different powers, instead of ki blasts. and the music got a bit repetative, but overall it was good.
cliche crap
originality is something long cherished now, this was just a collection of ideas rolled into one big piece of cliche dung =(