Nice
I like the story on this one you have some good elements of voices but some voices could be better but overall this was pretty nice a town and it's booze lol but anyways nice film here
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This used to be a peaceful town... until the killer appeared. And now nobody wants to drink booze anymore.
Nice
I like the story on this one you have some good elements of voices but some voices could be better but overall this was pretty nice a town and it's booze lol but anyways nice film here
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Entrance was alright but... he sure made a cool exit. :) Pretty smooth detective story! At the beginning I thought it'd be a bit more random, or symbolic, as in: the character with a bottle over his head actually was a bottle. Maybe that the main character was the bad guy too even though he didn't know it. Something like that. It turned out well, though! Nicely put together. If anything to improve: the main character's voice is a bit low sometimes. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks for the response!
I'll definitely work on my voice acting for the next cartoon.
The music is pretty cool. This feels inconsistent and doesn't really know if it wants to be serious or funny. The voice acting was not very good and it was hard to understand what the characters were saying sometimes. I understand you're not native English speakers. The animation and art are not always at the same level all the time either. Although they do kinda work with the tone of the animation. It was obvious from the moment the newscaster started talking to the detective that he was gonna be the killer. I appreciate that you put some actual effort into the killer but it should have been more subtle. Also, the Boozler confronts the detective outside the news station so it makes sense that the items would be there. There was no reason to assume that the news guy was the killer. He said he dropped his lighter so it makes sense he would drop it outside his workplace. It wouldn't mean he was the killer. It's not like he saw the killer drop it. The eyeball would make slightly less sense but it would still be possible that the killer would dump it outside the place where the guy was found. It's not like he was trying to find it. The detective also finds way too many things by slipping. Work on your animation and art and be more careful with your stories. Repetition can get tedious, like when he slips on everything. Also you could ask someone for voice-acting help right here on Newgrounds. I can see you put effort into this so you definitely have potential. Keep it up!
Thanks for the critical response!
I really appreciate the effort you've put into your review. It's my frist real animation, so I was definitely not expecting this. Regarding the lighter, the detective pegs the perp mostly on the eyeball on the floor and his past statements. The lighter is only the catalyst to his revelation. As for the reporter, he is just as brash and unsubtle as I wanted him to be :P.
I'll definitely keep on doing this though, so keep an eye out!