This is great
I decided to make an animation based on my past history working with cold cuts. Some of the customers I got were so weird I just had to animate my experience lol. Hopefully you can get a good laugh from it. I'm also playing around with a new style. I'm not replacing the classic style, just this video I decided to do it like this. Thanks for watching!
LAST VIDEO:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bsiAxJX8nz0
INSTAGRAM:
https://www.instagram.com/cheetoh_gra...
MUSIC:
http://incompetech.com/
http://freemusicarchive.org
SOUND EFFECTS:
http://www.freesfx.co.uk/
http://www.findsounds.com/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WoxnL5dakyA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=biTazsUR9Bs
This is great
Lmfao at "Just give me ham dude," I used to work at a boars head deli, that's how it is. Also the blank stare at moaning noise at "how much," and complaining about it being torn when you make it way too thin. The whole video is really relatable.
One thing you didn't mention that I'm sure any deli worker can relate to, "Hey, can I get the Happy Farms™ Ham" or something just reading off the packaging. Like, lady, I don't know what that is, we have 50 hams, can you just say regular ham or teriyaki or whatever you want
Cool
Nice little film you have here, the "VOICE" is really good here the narrating is awsome, I really like how you presented this, So apparently I have not seen this before but glad I had a chance to check this one out here, it was Advanced and Wonderfully shown its effort from with in.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles but maybe not.
~X~
I work retail and I see this shit every, single, day. My deli manager gets soo pissed off when customers actually come in and pull this shit.
Gotta love it when real life is dictated in animations!
5/5 for you!
The audio on the other hand, could use a bit of a touch up. Some static was noticed in the "HAAAAAAM-aaaa" screams :-)
I liked the animation style, with the simple line art backgrounds, and coloured works being the focus. It was also nice to have static character's line art have slight movement to show that they were still active in the scene.
Audio was all clear, and the dialogue was great. Awesome work!