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It looks good but the point...

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The animation was average, and the graphics were fine, but it really needs to be longer. Make it much longer, work on the animation and polish it up to improve.

Like I've said before, your animation can be more smooth and realistic. In this one however, a lot of clipping occurred at his hip. His lunge wasn't very realistic either. It was too sudden and too abrupt. It needs to be a lot more slow and smooth with a good amount of tripping over. I still believe you can go farther than this. Your lighting is quite good as always.

Can you please proceed to make a full madness SFM? SFM isn't really the most mainstream thing here but if you wanna make a name for yourself based on it then you should probably get to making a full animation. And you probably wanna improve alot. i watch alot of SFM's on youtube and this is way too slow compared to any of them.

Keep up SFM experiments! It looks weird like another Hat Fortress fan moovie.

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2.57 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 2, 2018
10:29 PM EDT
Software
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