Short film
Very short well that was a nice short and when I say short it really was a short, I think you can stretch this one out and make longer just a bit, some more scenes would be cool, just an idea though, so its something to think about or ad other short ones with this one.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
One thing I noticed was that this was just way too short, and you have a few options here, add more to your film, more scenes more info, more content, and or add this along with other short films all in one film so that there is abit more depth to the whole film.
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