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I m very sorry , i didnt get enough time , i m to blame , I animated it very little and the most of it is in animatic format.The Last part was fabulous , which made me think of a robot speaking about human behaviour and stuff.Did it in a great rush.Enjoyed it .Hope to do better next time .Critique Comment or Suggest.You are most Welcome .

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Short film

Very short well that was a nice short and when I say short it really was a short, I think you can stretch this one out and make longer just a bit, some more scenes would be cool, just an idea though, so its something to think about or ad other short ones with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
One thing I noticed was that this was just way too short, and you have a few options here, add more to your film, more scenes more info, more content, and or add this along with other short films all in one film so that there is abit more depth to the whole film.

~X~

hreyas responds:

its not a short film,I animated it on a dialogue for a group called 11secclub. But anyways thanks for the suggestion, i appreciate it

Entertaining sketch, though yes, missing some detail. :) Fun to watch though! Keep it going.

-cd-

Credits & Info

Views
578
Votes
82
Score
2.52 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 30, 2018
7:57 PM EDT
Genre
Other
Format
video
flash