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Lost The Plot | S1 EP 10 | Skit 10

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Richard has a very familiar conversation with his son Harry!


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You got some very professional and well made looking intro's, credits, logos, trademarks, etc.

But the bread and butter of your videos should be the animation itself and what your presenting in your video.

The character designs were good and the animation was not very complex.

The dialogue was funny and original.
Though it only lasted for about a minute.

You also had a copyrighted background image from "The Lion King".

I know it fit well with the humor and theme of your video, but if you want to be taken seriously as a professional animator. You can't do that (unless its creative commons or in the public domain)

Work on your animation skills and lay off all the intros and marketing for your channel.

Keep animating:)

NF7STUDIOS responds:

Thank you for the feedback! Back when I made this I wasn't really focusing on my animations as major in my life.. More of just a hobby.. But now I wouldn't do these things If I work on new videos! :) Check out my YouTube channel I have some newer stuff over there and You will see that I've updated my skill level :)

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Apr 9, 2018
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