The 2D animation in this was great,
Very smooth.
The animation style reminds me of "Gennedy Tartakovsky" and "Edd, Edd'n, and Eddy".
Good choice of background music.
I also kind of understand the story.
Is this a suppose to be a parody of our everyday lives?
Sure it could use some color and maybe a bit more detail in the backgrounds.
But I feel that it would ruin the charm of what you already have here.
I look forward to seeing more work from you:)