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Good fight

Ok so lets get this movie started here, sofar you have some good visuals, and something of pretty good interest, here, And I really like how this starts off. So this was actually pretty nifty of some film here good battle scene even if it was a tad short, but a good one regardless, so nice job here.

Was a tad short maybe you could stretch it out with a few more scenes or something.


WrightOnStudios responds:

Thanks for the feedback next time I'll look at that 😀

The way the characters spoke kind of reminded me of Banjo Kazooie, with the short audio samples, which I liked. The action was basic but clear if not a little stiff. Nice use of a virtual camera. The ending made me smirk. A cute little cartoon, no doubt. Keep it up!

WrightOnStudios responds:

Thank you :-) I appreciate the feedback this was my first animation that was over 10 seconds long so I was pleased with how it turned out. I think next time I will try to add more flow

Not bad! XD That ending too... the stick figure motions didn't always seem that natural, from a gravity-based perspective, but otherwise good fun! The voicing's just perfect too. Just like an old Kung Fu dub.


WrightOnStudios responds:

Thanks i had fun making it lol. i think i needed more flow but at the time of making it I didnt really know what it was (made it a few weeks ago). thanks for the feedback I will try and improve next time :-)

Credits & Info

3.24 / 5.00

Apr 7, 2018
9:11 AM EDT