There is some good potential in this movie, and I am really liking the vibe that flows with this, so dont lose track of that and really push this film forward. You have a funny idea here and it flowed well with the animation so was pleased with this one, maybe make some more.
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No major changes needed you have a nice idea here
funny and disgusting
Should it be a bad thing that if he changed the word poo to you and few other things it would have made a good love song?
John Waters would love you