Animation is not bad. The plot... could've been less obvious and somewhat more original/interesting. Also, the pause between his car stopped and collision is waaaayy too big.
It is about a boy and how his life unfolds when he doesn't chase after his dream.
Animation is not bad. The plot... could've been less obvious and somewhat more original/interesting. Also, the pause between his car stopped and collision is waaaayy too big.
okay, thank you for your critique. This will help me in te future.