Draw more in-betweens, heighten the framerate, have more consistent shading, and add sound.
That is my advice to you.
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This is my first Animation and i would like to get tips from the more advanced animators .
thanks :-)
Yes, far better than my start. Keep on animating!
Niceee dude, this is one of the best debut animations, seriously, you're up to a real good start.