Oh this was nice and the spiders was good too a nice visual here too was a bit on the short side
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First full project in flash done in a short amount of time so its bound to look a little shoddy. I was given a project to rewrite a popular nursery rhyme and create a small animation from it. I've been experimenting with flash for the past few months so I figured I'd give it a go with this assignment. I think it turned out a-okay.
This was done with stock sound, a narration done by a good friend of mine as well as adobe Animate, Photoshop, Premiere pro and After Effects.
I'm down for intense criticism. Give it a good a ol' tear.
Oh this was nice and the spiders was good too a nice visual here too was a bit on the short side
~X~
Some kind of hallucinogen huh... interesting little short! Rhyme, smooth animation, brooding music in the background... I feel like the narration could've been a bit more 'powerful', with depth, vibration, something that suits the brooding tone... but otherwise it's nice. Animation doesn't move much but does look good.
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Thank you for your response! I agree completely with your criticism of the narration, and its something I'm going to be paying more attention to in the future. Next time, it'll be along with more engaging animation. ;)