It looks like you've put some actual effort into it. It should be appreciated. The game has some kind of story, it has some kind of gameplay, few stages - it's fine, it's a good approach at making games. However, it all could be done better. especially the game mechanics.
I bet lots of people will find fights tedious, because enemies have a lot of health, and to kill them you just have to smash three buttons, so beating the fights is just a lot of button smashing. It just feels like the fights need something added to them, and the story could be longer.
I think you should keep on making games. You have what it takes to actually prepare the assets and finish a game, even if it's quite amateurly done. It's a good start, I believe if you go through some volume of work, you will make great games eventually. Try experimenting with the features. Try to add something interesting to each game.
Thanks, this game is one of my old games that i made. So i uploaded it here and didnt expect anyone to criticize this. So, thanks. I'm probably gonna make a new one...I was a bit crazy with the character designs but thats just how i drew them.