Well, I got stuck in the theater when the man in black began complaining about the music.

Simply put, you need to learn how to ease people into the story. I had absolutely no idea what was going on at the beginning of the game. What was the plot? Who are these characters? What is this place?

It also seems like English isn't your first language as there are some awkward sentence structures and use of some words that don't sound very natural, but you did well enough. (Although where I glitched, the man in black was speaking in french, so that might be part of the glitch).

Additionally, the pointing glove is very misleading. Typically, when something is pointing at something else, that something else is the object of desire, but instead you have to click the glove itself to progress or sometimes just anywhere on the screen. It was pretty inconsistent the little time I was able to spend playing this.

I'd try to create a less ambitious game first and work your way up and not to be discouraged.