Brilliant piece you have presented here
And so this is a Brilliant piece you have presented here, I do wish the characters were a tad bit better but for the mostpart they are ok, the animation is brilliant and the story that you present is very well played out, So my Opening Remarks for this fine entry are just that you have done A Wonderfully job on this it shows how you have pushed little elements to make this decent and its even better then just decent its great and fantastic, allthough there are some areas that could be better but im sure you will get to that in due time. There alot of things about this submission, but there was a few instances that showed a good Concept of Visionary But again this was a decent submission. and I have really come to enjoy this style, hope to see some positive improvments. adding even more flashy effects would be really cool.
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I would love some flashy effects on these.