Haha this was good and was very funny almost looks like a dance scene and the end was good too

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I give you 4 stars, becouse you put the music, background and you animate it solid.

Classic music. :) I like the style - it reminds me of the good ol' Marshmellow Madness days, and the animation overall's not bad at all! A few things to improve: the cracks in the wall don't seem all that realistic, maybe you could study images of those and find the 'pattern' a bit? The blood effects are gone, but some seem to appear almost at random, like the final one when he pushes the guy into the table - considering you don't really see the guy on the table 'move'. If the impact showed that'd look better I think, was actually wondering what happened at first. Did he shoot him? Did he stab him with a finger...? If you're going for more 'natural' action it also feels like the characters are moving around unnecessarily much without doing much damage, but in this particular case that just seems to add to the fun. Great start, and keep it going!

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Too short!

a movie this short with low quality shouldnt be posted in portal, more of dump grounds.
here are things i wanna point out:

1) tone down the movement, they all are going crazy bananas.

2) the movements are too choppy that it's hard to understand the fighting chronography, add ease in's and out's to prevent choppy movements. for example if you want your character to swing a bat you should charge it up then start moving it very slowly and progressively faster as the hand moves.

3) very very short to be placed in portal, if you wanna upload short movies make sure it's in all good quality

Other than that it's decent just be sure to think of the mistakes you did and try to learn from them.