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ADD COLOR - Adívolah

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This is my first animated short film, and i would love to read your opinion about it so i can improve.
Hope you enjoy it.

YT channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC72lSGA_avlOVsrv3eYQrRQ

Liebe ist für alle da.

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incredible shortfilm! I loved the visuals in it and I felt very relaxed while watching this, overall I'd say that you did a great job! ;D
The only thing that I think that you could've done a bit better would be making thouse pauses and scenes a bit shorter, I think the shortfilm turned out a bit longer than it should've and some scenes were really slow, but it's all not too bad ^_^

Awesome! Can't wait to see more interesting-looking abstract stuff like this! :)

Adivolah13 responds:

Hi, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
And yes, you should see the first version, it was even longer ... I still have a lot to learn.
Thanks for your time and review, I appreciate it a lot.

I'm already working on another short film, and it will be better.
:)