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The Sergio Show Episode #104

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Sergio goes back in time to save himself from an evil version of himself!

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A fantastic piece to the bigger puzzle

So here is A fantastic piece to the bigger puzzle what is that bigger puzzle, Im not sure but you do bring some nice style to the portal with a great piece of animation and this series has got slightly better with time and I have been pretty impressed with all that you do bring to the table so nice entry here on this one, It is a pleasure of mine reviewing this piece of work, there are some great things that happen in this one, dont get me wrong there are some improvments that can be made, but You have done a did piece of work here with everything that was happening on this. I Encourage you to keep making stuff like this, any additional detail would be great. And now the end is near in my review, while I had a fun time reviewing this I still had some confusion here but thats ok I Will watch it a few more times, but for the mostpart this was notbad interesting on some parts and could be somewhat better in others, So in my Closing Remarks Overall you have produced a good submission here, Keep up the interesting flash-works. Sergio has some good stories and they all bring some interesting elements.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More random stories in future stuff like this one here.

~X~

Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next one.

Hey!
So here's the "better" episode of your show.
This is the one with "improved most of the things you just said", at least you are saying that.
Let's see what has been improved since then:

1. "The backgrounds" - The backgrounds are still entirely made with a block/circle/line tool.
The "studio" backgrund is pixeleted while zoomed and the "Sergio" word is outside the
"Sergio time machine room" sign. [X]
2. "The host" - it wasn't changed at all. It's still not shaded and MS paint'y [X]
3. "The lip-sync" - It wasn't fixed that much. words like "you" don't have the "o" mouth shape. I wasn't looking at the rest but that's an example of random lip-sync. [X]
4. "The talk-show format" - well, I guess it's not a talk show anymore.
It's some sort of adventure of yours, so I'll give it a pass [V]

The score: 1/4

The biggest problem I have with you is the fact, that you are calling yourself a cartoonist, but most of the animation is done by putting the torso of the character and classic tweening the arms. 80% of the animation is just classic tween. This is not how you make a traditional animation. I've seen your hand drawn animations and I see that you can do the frame by frame animation. Use this method, not the one you are using now, cuz PEOPLE WILL MOSTLY KNOW YOU FROM THIS LAZY-ASS ANIMATION STYLE. Also The parts that you can't classic tween look like they were made with no effort (the main example: ep.100 [after 100 firework blast]).

This will be my last advice:
IF YOU AREN'T GOING TO PRACTICE ON REAL ANIMATION, THEN YOU WILL NEVER GET BETTER AT IT. STOP THIS CLASSIC TWEEN BULLSHIT.

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Feb 21, 2018
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