Hmm. The distance between the characters in some cuts is too big in comparison to literally seconds before.
That's jarring, and so is the voicework. It's somewhat fitting for the female character but not the warrior. It's understandable if it's yours, not otherwise.
When she killed the snake i thought she was gonna move in to hug the guy or something, it looked very weird.
Oh shit, damn. Hahah. The fighting looks really darn good.
That twinkling star sound effect was goofy.