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Enjoy this thing which took me over a month to make lol.

-Any tips on improving would be appreciated
-its quite fast paced but in the end i just had fun making it.

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The animation was smooth, well colored, snappy and overall timed perfectly.
My advice would be to either work on better audio or play to those strengths and have the comedy stem from that.
The writing was decent given how well everything else was done but overall I believe that's something you should improve on and will over time. ;)

Hellbenders much?

Utter garbage. Too much like Oney/'Pebbles' work in the faces, movements, even voices... plus it's chock full of goddamn ear-rape and nobody wants damaged ears or speakers. Holy crap...

I'm sure i'm not the first one to say this but it reminds me of psychicpebbles. There is a lot of animation in this. I always see something moving, good job. I think the audio needs a bit of work it's not bad is just ok. It sounds like you wanted to have some of the characters yell but they did a quiet yell if you know what i mean. if you can lower the gain on your mic and just scream into it that would fix that. lol. Nothing feels super out of place. All and all a good video. Keep it up.

its like a dollar store psychicpebbles...


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3.55 / 5.00

Feb 17, 2018
5:02 PM EST
  • Daily 3rd Place February 19, 2018