Well Firstly it doesn't out stay its welcome so that is good but the characters make sense but aren't special but the problems I have is that there is no detail on the paint nor the characters you could be added more colors of depth onto the pain or shaving onto them but overall the idea is basic and works well it is just that the animation falls flat.
Thanks for your comment! I'm looking forward to make a new animation, this time putting more effort into it. I'm pretty new in tye animation stuff and I'm still learning the basics. I'll take your comment as a constructive critique.