A video based on the bestseller book "the obstacle is the way" kind of a animated book review with a little humor. It is about looking at the problems/obstacles we all run into from a different perspective..You can chack out more of my videos right here:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5tX2NdS4NxgPaLMifByl_g
Your voice usually sounds absolutely like a TV advert- sharp, not hesitant and to the point. Although that gets the basic message across most clearly, in this instance, where you allowed a little more personality to slip through, I preferred it and it made an otherwise simple message more appealing.
Keep going, the messages are worthwhile.
I didn't read the book but sounds really interesting!