Without music or sound effects, this becomes very boring; there's a gamut of royalty free music here on the Audio portal. Feel free to use my music. This could easily be a 2.5star cartoon if it had the right audio cues. In addition, the speech bubbles are not containing the captions so either change the speech bubbles or change the font type and/size. The art style is too simplistic and it's hard to discern where exactly the scene is beyond the light house. Is it a forest?

A preloader or an intro is always a nice touch. The concept could be well received if depicted well. The poor artwork and lack of audio render this potentially good cartoon into a unsatisfying piece. Keep practicing! I'm sure you'll create something cool in the future.