This is really bad. The animation relies too heavily on extended loops and that gives it a very static feel, like you're watching a slide show. Also, many of the sprites appear to be lifted from free resources (like MUGEN) and that seems kinda lazy. In addition to that you could've chosen a better song instead of this dispensable J-Garbage.

You're good at sprite animation! Perhaps use a more elaborate thumbnail, the characters on white gives a "beginner" impression. Thanks for sharing!