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I bambini i tossici e il beduino part 1

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the story its from my friend carlo the carachters are me and my friend in a child way, we see a old man talking about wagner going in venice and talking about the police could be an orchestra, full of harmony and sinfoniaa...

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This isn't very good. There are the minuses:

-The movement of the actors are too choppy even for this artstyle's standards.
-This isn't english. This should at least have subtitles, so the 90% of the people would understand the animation.
-The voices are just all over the place. There's just a lot wrong with it, that I can't describe it.
-Some ators don't event have "lipsync" such as the "afro agent guy with a phone"
-The music is too loud compared to the voices and I'm talking about the comparison, not the volume itself
-There are some reused animation parts such as the "dance party scene" (Which is too long when we see it for the first time).
- is there an end here, cuz I was watching this while I was writing this (and correcting the typos) and it just doesn't end. It just goes on and on and on.

I really don't know what to say else. If this is a joke, then it's not funny even when I don't understand the language of the movie.

P.S: is the animation looping, cuz while I was about to submit the reviev I saw the same 7 scenes.
P.S 2: Yeah, it's looping, so here's a bonus minus:

-Show us the end card after the movie or just upload it as a movie with sliders and stuff.

MisticFish responds:

I know the animation is not in english, i will upload the english later, the afro guy dont speak, its just the narrator that talks in that part. Theres no end because i didnt put the loading thing in the beginning, my fault :/. No its not a joke its just that im starting to make animation and this is like a test for me see what to improve and for my friends to see. Mmh maybe ill change everything and put the animation when is really finished..and in english so everybody can enjoy it. ahaha ah its the first part of the story i have to put in parts because is very long and i have trouble in
converting and stuff like that but i will inform myself for this on tutorials and exetera..

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2.24 / 5.00

Feb 3, 2018
2:17 PM EST