It's great it's just to slow
Author Comments
This is the series i will be working on. I hope you like it. in this episode, eggman sends Mecha Sonic out to get sonic, tails, and knuckles' DNA.
You did improve the text-drop, so that's good! Perhaps you could leave a forward arrow button instead of setting a time for each dialogue, that way the viewer can choose their own reading pace. Thanks for sharing and I'm glad to see improvement in the general vibe of the movie.
MultiAdventures984 responds:
Thanks for the advice