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THE AMAZING PHONE GAME

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AVOID THE OBJECTS FLYING AT YOU!!
THIS GAME IS MEANT TO BE PLAYED USING A MOBILE DEVICE
IF THAT WASN'T OBVIOUS

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I think it's at least 3 stars so i'm gonna try to up your rating a bit with the extra 2, I like the mechanics of this game, brick animation and score tabe. My advice is change the timing of the bricks because they come down in the center fast right before a wall obliterates you. And maybe add a cool bg and character.

A score board or keeping time would make this game interesting as well as adding new features to make it harder. It has potential.

JacobMcKissock responds:

Added some sounds and some lose screens if you would like to check it out, also an online high score server will be up soon so you can see who you're up against!

In regards to the author comments, no it's not that obvious. More importantly, this game has no sense accomplishment or fear. The screen just reloading doesn't make me feel defeated. A simple "you lose", or "Ha! You lose BOI!" would help. Some music, sound effects. Things of that nature. The graphics are simplistic. It looks more like you've developed an engine than a game.

I'm pretty sure if you dressed this up with music, sound effects, a points/score system, a preloader, menu, credits, lose screen, win screen, and some levels, this'd be a fine game. Feel free to browse NG's audio portal for royalty free music. Feel free to use my musc ;) Thanks for sharing and keep practicing!

JacobMcKissock responds:

Thanks for the feedback, made me really rethink the concept, added some sounds, and a lose screen along with a high score generator, unfortunately the high scores only show as your personal scores, however I am working on an online server for the scores so you can see everyone else on the score board. I hope this helps you reevaluate your opinion, thanks
-Jacob

The red thing that you're supposed to duck under goes way too fast for you to really react quick enough.
And the buttons for moving the square are way too far apart on computer.
Maybe not label your games as amazing when none of your games have even demonstrated themselves to be at all "amazing".
Please improve your skills until you feel as if you can make a better than mediocre product then post what you can come up with.
I'd like to see what you could make with actual skill. -Daniel

JacobMcKissock responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I would agree that the red part could be slower however as the name would suggest this game is NOT meant to be played on using the computer, although it is possible to do so it is not recommended for anything other than a phone.

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Score
2.22 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 29, 2018
7:06 PM EST
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