I started it a few months ago and finally its end, I hope you enjoy watch it as I when i did it.
I didnt focus in any genre I just guessed that could be interesting this kind of short.
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SFX and Music:
https://www.zapsplat.com/
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Youtube link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9PNQWFvVfc0&t=20s
I like the idea. :) It's easy to follow, but feels like most of those food-fetching moments just flash by, none really go all the way with the adventure... and when he's worn out at the end you understood a lot went down, but you never actually got to see the best parts. The main character form does look a bit strange, lower body almost like a ball... but I like the style otherwise. Feels like you've got something pretty new going on here. Nice short!
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Thanks, This short were a lot os caos in my mind trying to do a lot of things and keeping a consistent history in a short time but at the end I learned a lot of things useful for future projects.
A good story that was easy to follow.
Animation is ok.
The main character design looked a little weird.
Not a lot of variation in color scheme.
I was trying to figure out what to correct, Thanks for your observations are realy helpfull
Not bad animation, some parts are very fluent, and it's good for it having silent dialogue , my only complaint is that the contrast of colors isn't very wide , I'm seeing a whole lot of white and other colors have a white like shade, and some parts feel a little slow, never stop improving though!
Thanks for the feedback
Great job! Here's a tip: I usually convert text to shapes and then skew them for signs on surfaces.
Thanks, I will try it
