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I am beginner :D All tips will be apreciated

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Looks promising. I'd advise mixing speaking and action. For example, the characters can jump into fighting (like, the red one suspect that the other guy caused the destruction and attack him). And yeah, you'd better find someone to correct language mistakes.

djlukeb responds:

Hello Bro thanks for your comment. Examples of mistakes. English is not my native language. Have a nice day :)

Here are some tips:-add some sounds
-make the character speak a bit faster
-and most of all,write correctly.

djlukeb responds:

Hello Bro Do u know how to scroll animation? SWF file? For example in this animation action begins at the end. I want to see if gif files are working properly. English is not my native language, could u write faults? Thank u for your comment. I appreciate it and have a nice day :)

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