Student vs Master

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This was a beginner animation I did for my animation class in College, which gave me a better grasp on the technique. This looks super rough but I'm open to constructive criticism to help me improve.

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Pretty good motion. The only thing i can say is the characters were a bit rough but im sure you knew that already

Hmmm Potential, I Would Suggest Maybe Focusing On Shorter Animations So That You Can Focus Double Down On The Details Art Wise. You Got That Sound Sync Down Perfect. I Guess What I Mean Is Focus On One Scene At A Time, Finish Each Scene, And Then Splice Them Together. Such As The First Scene I Would Split This Into Is When The First Guy Turns Around And Taunts, The Second Scene Would Start After The Taunt. All In All This Works Great As A Framework To Expand On. Keep Up The Work

Mark-Lamot responds:

Hmm, I never thought about that. Thanks a plenty man, I have a few more projects in the works so I can't wait to put my new skills to the test :)

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Jan 20, 2018
6:38 PM EST