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Tom and Dan episode 1

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Dan and tom are finally here!!!!
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Step up your game a bit. First of all, I didn't understand what was going on.
So, there was a hole in the floor? The other guy was scared of it? and someone infiltrated the base??
What?
There is no backstory, you can't just throw us in a scene without context, and say "Enjoy it!" because I can't enjoy this.
Write a script (I don't wanna say you're just going from your head, but...) You are going off your head. It's almost like YOU don't even know what the story is.
Put more work into this. Don't expect this to be instantly praised.

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Uploaded
Jan 17, 2018
9:03 PM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original
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