I really....want a real full game of this teaser. It seems interesting. I'll wait for youuuuuuuuuuuuu~~~

it isnt a game is there a way to create one does uda creates them or its from human soemthign about pi which dies my otilet got a colour machine or soemthing im blonde ihear all there is jsutcie and a tiolet sound of whell of robo ky as from turnovo how was the wtf collective phane stuff
it gots autonomic code right :? :D

Has potential, I guess. I clicked through to the end. But it's not actually a game, so ...

Ok, so we've got the first chapter of a story, essentially. The main strength of this is the sense of mystery- you tease the player, and I want to find out what happens next. Major weakness is English- this needs thorough proofreading, as a text-based game with constant typos and spelling errors is going to put a lot of people off.

Also, if I'm playing as a character, I want to identify with him or like him. Having a grouchy character who keeps saying 'fuck' and asking unanswerable questions is fine, but he needs to be funny or likeable, or unusual with it- your protagonist just seems unpleasant.

I'd be interested to see this if you come back to it.

Though the game looks fairly decent, there are too many bugs to be able to play it properly, the loading times takes the player out of any immersion the game could possibly have, and the script is not exactly the most exiting.. in the other hand, the artstyle looks pretty good! (assuming this was not made with RPG maker's assets).
Anyway, I'm sure it can be a pretty good game if polished correctly! so please don't get discouraged!