I like the idea and the aesthetic of it, and, it is good for a first upload. However, some suggestions:
Things to work on:
- Find a way to kinda polish it up a bit; the mechanics are nice, however, sometimes they didn't work as well and weren't as fluid, and, some of the challenge element's hitboxes felt off too.
- The font, a little pet peeve of mine so this may just be me, however, the font for "start" and "restart" were very hard to read.
- The soundtrack could've been a bit more diverse, however, I think this shouldn't be taken as a "what should've been" rather a "thing I should improve upon in the future" because resources to music can be limiting.
- Finally, the challenges themselves, they felt like they went from 0 to 100 really fast and I think it should've been a steadier pace.
- Great Aesthetic!
- Good mechanics and ideas
- Generally fun to play
Definitely has room for improvement but also a lot of potential, keep up the hard work and I think you could make a great game. :)
Thank you for the feedback it is really helpful and a good insight into the things we missed. We have made major improvements to the game and have actually fixed some of the issues you found and other bugs we found through our extensive testing process. I know that this is a late reply but we plan on updating the current build here on New Grounds so we can get some feedback on the new state of the game. Thank you again for taking the time and letting us know your input and hope to receive more once we have updated the build we have up.
Sincerely the team from Le Lines