There is a lot of room for improvement but best of luck in your future animation
He was young and his mom and dad was killed by the thugs so he practice alot using the scthye to kill and some martial arts
P.S.-pls like it i made it for 1 month
There is a lot of room for improvement but best of luck in your future animation
Ah, reminiscent of the Xiao Xiao cartoons of yester-year :) What's killing it is two things. The character movements are rigid; Google a book called "The Animator's Survival Guide" it'll help tons and browse NG's archive for flash tutorials. Also, the ending's abrupt. He pulls the scythe and vanishes? It's lackluster due to the lack of music.
Consider adding more. For example, why exactly is the protagonist hunting these men and who are the enemy men to begin with? Even without dialogue or music, you could begin the animation with a intro scene that explains the reason for the violence.
Keep practicing, I'm sure you'll get there in due time. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you very much
I think it's nice,though it's too short for what it is.If you would have made something longer I would have gave more stars for sure.
Good fighting sequence. Would really like to see it fleshed out.