JAR media anime opening

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7 month animation project, its actually the second animation I made in animate and it was pretty hard to actually get through.

This is the version I was going to release if I didn't have to get someone to edit it for me because my vegas broke so it's pretty rough in comparison


Pretty nice one. The drawing, the music, the action...
I just don't know what is going on. (Mostly fighting I see but who, why and what else?)
Ohh and the teeth could be less detailed in the few closeup shots. They seem odd for me.

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SirDraws responds:

Thankyou so much for the feedback, I really agree with all of the mistakes you pointed out but I have some tangible ish reasons why a lot of them exist
1: I made this for the JAR media community who are very familiar with the random scenes in this, you can see where a lot of the things I recreate in this come from in here https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMSCZg_JD4s though the flow and pacing of it make no sense at all to someone who isn't really a fan, I basically jumped into this thing having no storyboard or anything
2: a lot of the faces are a mixture of copied screenshots and completely made up animation and I wasn't really very experienced with animating so copying felt easier when I could actually look at a screenshot but then made the whole thing very inconsistent.

Love the song from Naruto. Great use of it. And really like the visuals and animation. I always says that the right song can motivate an animator. Especially this one. Looking forward to the next one.

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3.02 / 5.00

Jan 8, 2018
2:28 PM EST
Comedy - Parody