Like the story choice games but grammar is bad. Maybe the game was made in another language and poorly translated.
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Its a early stage of game.If you like it and wanna more i can continue.Please at least leave a comment about it please and have fun!!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oSo6PVzAOqM <my cringy video (playing this)
the game itself is awesome,would 5star but -1 star for grammar , great job btw!
cant wait for the next part (forest) :'D
NiobiuMmm responds:
Thanks for comment.Soon new story coming.I hope you enjoy. About this game you can explore more you only saw the half of the game.
This is game is a good start. I say definitely fix the grammar since it takes me out of the mood of the story sometimes. Other that, I love you to continue and make more. (owo)b
NiobiuMmm responds:
Right now im creating new game. It will be more professional. I start to learn html and next one will be more immersive. Thanks for comment and i hope you enjoyed.
Not a bad start. I've always liked text based adventures like this. I definitely think you should keep working on it. My suggestion would be to work on grammar. English can be a sucky language, but right now it's a little hard to read.
NiobiuMmm responds:
Thanks for comment and yes next projects will be more professional. But im glad you can have good time with my game.And feel free to give any suggestion.
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