Nice but the rain is really horrible to look at.
You should have make 2,3 or even 4 frames of rain rather than 1 frame that's flashing into your eyes,and seriously it hurts to look at it.
The first sound page of my fan adventure, Spanswipe. The story can be found here https://mspfa.com/?s=21331&p=1
EDIT: I heavily took Hesiolite's comment into consideration and thought that the suggested change was a kinda necessary thing. Enjoy the slightly improved version. Thank you so much for the support, and don't worry, this is just the beginning of a much bigger story than you may think.
Nice but the rain is really horrible to look at.
You should have make 2,3 or even 4 frames of rain rather than 1 frame that's flashing into your eyes,and seriously it hurts to look at it.
Hope your enjoy the slightly new and improved version. Thank you so much for the review and bringing the eye soaring issue to my attention.
nicely drawn movie, with some really good and fluid animation!
i liked the raining animation, the camera pan/moving camera scenes, and the whole design of both the homestuck girl, and of her abductor.
the whole story was simple, and everything was beautifuly drawn, while the animation was very nicely balanced and superb in general..
the only ''problem'' in here was that the story was way too sad. the homestuck girl got abducted by that creepy guy, and he took her in his truck. what will happen next?
other than that, its was a nicely animated, beautifully drawn movie, with good character designs, and cool face expressions.
keep it up, you're good!