¿Como a la gente no le gusta esto? Hay gente que no sabe que es bueno, como ese tal IAMPIGGY, mejor que se vaya a roblox

This really could have been much longer than it was.

Good flow, The speed of movement can be improved a bit, and i saw a few flaws in the editing, (maybe that was the fault of your program tho), Regardless, I liked it, (P.S, Add some droning music or ambient sounds in the background.)