The idea is good, the execution isn't so much. It needs a lot of polish, jumping is super floaty, it also needs a change in sound or even a mute button. A level select wouldn't go amiss, animations rather than snapping back to beginning, it seems more of a prototype at the moment :/ I did like your incorporation of the words as danger as well that was unique, but as it currently is it's a 1 star from me.
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See how far you can get! See if you can get to the boss level! Give up if you want, but you'll never get to see the story unravel!
(not much story) This is a very begginer level platformer, but I would appreciate tips and critisism. Thanks!
CanoSellers responds:
Thanks for your honesty and in the future I plan on learning how to do more with my games, but as of now that's my best work lol. Anyways I'll take your advice and try to do some of these things someday!
hahaha, this game drove me nuts. lol. got to level 40 and thought i had won.....hahah
CanoSellers responds:
I'm glad u had a good time with it! There are only like 10 more levels you can do it!
great! 11 and 7 though...
CanoSellers responds:
Haha yeah, some of the levels are too difficult too early on. I'm getting used to balancing games but I need some practice.
Not the best visually, and I hate the sliding mechanic, but still pretty good, plenty of levels!
CanoSellers responds:
I know the visuals aren't great. This is mainly because I'm not really an artist and I don't have many connections. I made this game on my own and I wish I could make it pretty lol. I also hate the sliding mechanic TBH but with out it the game is sort of easy and it doesn't work as well
More fun than I thought it would be. Didn't get to the end. Would love to know how many levels there are.
CanoSellers responds:
There are 50 levels total. Although the last level is the boss, there is a level that is right after it to make it a total of 50. It's just a you win screen that you can beat to bring you back to the beginning again. Oh, and thanks for all the positive feedback!