Well these always tend to be a little funny its just so hard to hear at times, and some subtitles would really come in handy here, also some extra shading and detail on the props around the stufio like his "DESK" all it takes is some shading here and there. With all that said you cando alot more with this I have made a few suggestions and I do hope they help to improve on this, now dont get me wrong you have something decent here and the effort shows but could still use a few more additions of stuff and so on, so go ahaead and give some new ideas a try. And hope to see some of those changes in the future or even on something new you may be working on.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This would be much improved with some "SUBTITLES" it would help for others to understand abit more as sometimes its hard to understand whats being said, not a real big deal, but its nice to have subtitles as a feature on this flash. You flash would look more improved and it would help some others to understand it better. You can even have it as an optio to Toggle on or off, so that the users who dont need it have that option availble to them. Some extra shading and detail on desk and other stuff around the studio.