Good work
First thing to mention off the bat is your graphics which were pretty solid as a whole but your cornerstone piece of this flash which was the spaceship looked a bit simple compared to everything else and so it stuck out in a bad way. Your voice acting was terrific, kinda creepy to be honest and the background music was good. Your pacing was probably your biggest problem, like when the beam is coming down on the guy at his mail box it takes a long time to get to him. Overall a great effort though.