All In a nutshell
I love how these start off so pleasent then something "BAD" happens like the female character checking on him at the start, but its all in good "FUN" My suggestion is the same ad some voices into these that would be a real plus, So this was all in a nutshell, because you put all this energy into this and it shows, these characters are funny even if they are not as fine tuned as I would like but they are still very entertaining and the color and humor is what I really enjoy about these, so Keep making these. And so as I start on this submission, it has some interesting points, some not so interesting parts aswell, but I guess thats what the reiew feedback is for, for what works and what doesnt work, But it starts off kind of so-so but does get better, I was pleased with a few parts and hope the rest does get better, But I will suggest some feedback later. And well there you have it, it was an alright flash could have some adjustments but thats for later, but for the mostpart this was still an interesting and somewhat entertaining submission, there are a few more suggestions but thats for later aswell.
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My suggestion is the same ad some voices into these that would be a real plus