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Raging Stickman

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Well that was... uneventful. XD Was thinking his head might explode from all that focus, or something... the motions come across alright though, to focus on that. He starts a bit too still, but once he starts moving it's good. When his chest is heaving btw: it should affect more of his body. Head bobbing slightly, shoulders up and down, if he's breathing right also his stomach. Good start though!


CarreyJohn responds:

Thank you very much for the helpful critique! I appreciate it.

It was too short, the animation itself had no point, if it was longer maybe then it would be off decent quality, its not even ten seconds long! In terms of proportions you did a pretty good job although you should've drawn the torso lines over where the upper-arm lines started.

CarreyJohn responds:

It has no point, yes! That's because it is 'EXPERIMENTAL'. I wanted to see what can I do in terms of perspective. Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated! -John

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2.56 / 5.00

Nov 8, 2017
6:01 AM EST