Without a doubt you are very good at animations, but the humor is hum..meh. Find yourself a writer to help you. other than that, it's perfect. :)
A short movie/trailer parody starring Brad Spitt and Morgan Freezeman that I call Batmanman. Originally based on a C&H fanmade animation. My dumb youtube channel is called Blah Blah Media. I hope you enjoy
Without a doubt you are very good at animations, but the humor is hum..meh. Find yourself a writer to help you. other than that, it's perfect. :)
wow i really appreciate the comment, i'm still practicing, i just started about a month ago and i'll definitely work on my script writing. thanks again!
The animation is good but you should really put a bit more thoughts in the humor(not only the jokes but also the direction).Try a bit harder.
HI Hesiolite :) thank you for your input, it really helps
Animation is pretty solid, not too far off what you see in a CH short, but I would say you need better scripting. Humor is kinda random and bland. If I were to separate it, would rate animation at 4stars, the humor and dialogue at 1 1/2 - 2 stars.
Hi SpikeyKun, thank you for your advice, I've been waiting on someone to lay down some constructive criticism all day. I'm not entirely sure where i want to go with this but i'll work on it.
thanks:)