Could be worse but hey it was OK,
But for me it felt like there were too many scenes where it felt like the story didn't move on and it felt like an awkward pause after each scene.
Hope you keep this in mind and move on.
Good Luck further !
May be worse, but hey, at least we got a scrolling camera in one of the clips!
Could be worse but hey it was OK,
But for me it felt like there were too many scenes where it felt like the story didn't move on and it felt like an awkward pause after each scene.
Hope you keep this in mind and move on.
Good Luck further !
the story didn't move on